Writing Ch. I again meant changing a lot. Story line changed and personalities changed. The most obvious change (although it's only obvious to me) is Kai's change. I (and others) found Kai to be very weak and 'whiney'. But mostly she lacked dimension and room for growth. I've changed that. Kai has lots of changes to make before her story is finished.

Another issue I must address is Migele. A favorite character among everyone who's every read it, Migele is one of my favorite creations. And his mysterious nature and past allow me to play with his character. Migele and Kai (although they have differences) are very similar. Watch as they live and grow...together...